Arron Peterson

Hi godinthesun,

Before we can accept your character there's a few things to go over:
Look over spelling and grammar, it's okay if there's a few minor mistakes but it's hard to read it through.

Put spaces between each catagory, like I am putting spaces between each point

For Arron's personality think of some flaws he might have. Never gives up and always happy are positive traits, but you can easily turn them into flaws. Maybe he's so happy it's annoying and he is naive and too trusting towards others. Or maybe he's very stubborn and wants his way with everything, even if it's not the most logical action to take. Maybe he's selfish.

Also when putting traits next to each other that are opposite (serious yet fun?) go into more detail. When is he serious and at what times does he allow himself to loosen up?
Can you tell more about Arron through his likes and dislikes? Was he on the basketball team? Is there a reason he likes archery? Everyone doesn't like war or seeing their friends hurt. What makes Arron's dislike different from other people? Is he very protective because of this? Is he a pacifist?

In Half Blood Heroes the camp and characters already have their own history. The site itself has already been through 3 years of roleplaying. Having there have been a war three (or less) years ago would mean that the whole camp would have had to have been a part of it. There hasn't been a war before though, so it wouldn't be consistent with the past. Unless the war wasn't involved with the camp (but that's another logistics problem itself), try to think of something else as a part of his history.

Thanks,
Porter

Likes: listening to music, his favorite kind being Rock. He likes to sing and hum to himself different tunes. He likes and enjoys going outside early in the morning before everyone is awake. He likes climbing trees and mountains. He loves being alone but doesn't mind the company of his friends. He loves looking at stars at night. Being born under the sign of Apollo he naturally loves Archery, shooting hoops, and the sun.

Dislikes: Crowded areas, Crowded loud areas he dislikes competitions against other demigods. He doesn't like his own height because he's not very tall to be in the Apollo cabin. He dislikes hair dye and make-up because he is proud of who he is. But doesn't mind if others use/wear it. He hates stereotypes being in the Apollo cabin not being one of the "Big Three"